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attachment below is the general thing I wanted to say Please help me edit the paragraph and make it more persuading. Thanks

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Extenuating circumstances that caused you to fail to meet Satisfactory Academic Progress
What has changed that will enable you to meet Satisfactory Academic Progress at the next evaluation
The steps you will take to ensure you continue to meet Satisfactory Academic Progress in the future