Rhetorical Analysis Revised Draft

Rhetorical Analysis Revised Draft

For the revised draft, make changes to improve the first draft of your paper. You can consider the feedback from the rough draft workshop, my comment.

comment: This draft explains Walker’s article clearly and includes relevant insights about purpose and audience. One area for improvement is supporting focus and evidence. First off the supporting points may be clearer if each supporting paragraph began by directly stating the rhetorical choice to be discussed in that paragraph. I felt like your first point was about defining terms and the second about references to prior research, but more direct topic statements and also more detailed evidence may make for stronger supporting analysis

First draft attatched!