Hypothetical Study/Research Paper

Hypothetical Study/Research Paper

I have attached my research paper and I have also attached 2 comments from the professor in regards to my Method and Results section. I have attached an example research paper that shows what the professor expects when it comes to the method and results section. I need a revision before I hand this final paper in. So, you need to do an Abstract page for me which should only be about a paragraph long and then revise the Method and Results Section.The Discussion part will then need revision. I really need this to be good and correct so I get a good grade.