Establishing A Curfew for Teens to Eliminate Gun Violence

Establishing A Curfew for Teens to Eliminate Gun Violence

Attached below is a completed essay that I turned in to my professor. She made various marks on my essay and she left a note as well. Can you kindly revise/edit the essay and follow all of the information that she wants to be changed including the works cited page? Please pay close attention to everything that she had reference too. If you have to take out or add somethings, please do so.

The thesis sentenece is the last setence in the intro pargraph and the last sentence in the conlcusion paragraph. Keep it that way becuase those are her rules.