English essay editing: Paraphrase the sentences and correct the grammar. (1500 words)

English essay editing: Paraphrase the sentences and correct the grammar. (1500 words)

I’ve wrote a English essay about ‘leftover women’ in China, but most of the sentences are collected from other articles without paraphrasing.

Therefore, I need a help of
1. paraphrasing all the sentence in this essay
2. correct the grammar
3. smoothen the sentence into more academic style

I also hope the essay can be shorter after modifying! (The essay is in the attachment)

10% -18% tips will be add for excellent work!