Outlining how you have responded to the feedback offered on your essay

Hi buddy:

This work is to “Outlining how you have responded to the feedback offered on your essay”.

The essay title is “Explain something you have learnt in your degree, to an audience of your choice. Alongside this explanation, critically comment on the ideas about learning that have informed your choices.”

(I will upload the essay title and requirement and feedback and screenshot of notes from my tutor etc. in attachment)

Please modify the essay according the feedback and comments from the my tutor, I will upload the screenshot of all feedback)

Thank you very very much! : )